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Graphics: 4, the drawings were decent but the animation consisted mostly of tweens. The lines of the drawing were much too thick to make the viewing experience pleasurable to the viewer's eyes and the edges of the background looked rushed. However, the weapon drawings were decent, as were the clown drawings.

Style: 2, there was nothing in the content of this flash that deemed it to be original or refreshing. Although a decent concept, the execution of it seemed rush and there was one single 'camera angle' or view used. For the viewer to be maintained the whole time, there has to be a mix of close-ups and far-away shots.

Sound: 3, while the music was decent by itself, I felt that it was not the right type of music for the flash. The sound effects were irregular and there was a lack of consistency of using the same sound.

Violence: 5

Interactivity: 0, not applicable.

Humour: 0, not applicable.

Overall it had some good points, but it needs room for improvement. It brought nothing new to Newgrounds. Perhaps try making different types of flashes to build up a good portfolio.

PeteZahut responds:

thank you Mr.1.96 Batting Average. Now...GO AWAY!

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+ Decent quality voice acting.

- Bad microphone quality, too much background noise.

+ It was hillarious and enjoyable.

= Alright animation, nothing spectacular

- Overuse of that paddington bear song?

Once again the enjoyableness of the flash manages to cover the not so great graphics.

Hehe

While the picture quality may not have been that good, the humour of the film was a strength. Good job, Hoogi.

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+ There were decent graphics in the flash, for most of the time it was well drawn.

+ Mildly humorous ending.

? Why did you do all of the random stretching-wide zooming-in? It looked not very pleasing to the eyes.

- Way too long introduction.

- I felt there were a few out of place sound-effects.

Good luck with future projects!
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